name: 'Wilson Del Villar'
email: wvillar@locusdigitedge.com
comment: "Hi,\r\n\r\nThe story behind Naked Wild Honey is truly inspiring. Your passion for raw and natural honey shines through in every word. I love how you emphasize the ethical sourcing from dedicated beekeepers.\r\n\r\nThat said, I observed a few issues on your website.\r\n\r\n1) The title \"Naked Wild Honey\" is catchy but lacks a strong keyword focus that could help with search engine optimization. Adding specific keywords like \"raw honey\" or \"natural sweeteners\" could attract more visitors who are searching for these products.\r\n\r\n2) The phrase \"Bee meets wildflower. Then the delicious happens\" is intriguing, but it's vague and doesn't clearly communicate the unique benefits of Naked Wild Honey. Your potential customers may be looking for specific information on health benefits or flavor profiles, which could be highlighted more prominently.\r\n\r\nThe three issues highlighted are just the beginning.\r\n\r\nWe have identified additional areas in our full audit that could significantly enhance your site's performance.\r\n\r\nAre you available later this week for a quick walkthrough on a no-strings-attached call?\r\n\r\nBest,\r\nWilson\r\nHead of Design\r\n\r\np.s. If you'd rather not hear from me again, just reply \"Mute\" and I'll be silent as a mouse."
